Prototype Critique

My biggest problem with my prototype right now is that it still has a lot of work left to do on it. I am mostly satisfied with the story and the illustrations. I am now just in the process of coloring it. As far as the construction and binding go, I want to make my book as much like an actual comic book as possible. I want to get the closest equivalent to that kind of paper and so I foresee having to experiment in order to learn how printing on that works.